editorial-feedback

This chapter consists primarily of editorial notes and meta-comments regarding the structure and timing of the narrative, particularly focusing on the placement of messages and their pacing. The discussion highlights concerns about the clarity of numerical references and the integration of events with the broader storyline, especially those occurring on Tines World.

This chapter appears to be a meta-textual or editorial note rather than a narrative segment, focusing on internal discussions about terminology and narrative clarity. It includes considerations on word choice, specifically preferring 'window' over 'display,' and debates about character motivations and plot logic, particularly regarding the actions of the Out of Band (OOB) group and their decision not to rescue failing ships. The text also references a flashback to a character named Grondr's parting remark, indicating ongoing narrative structuring.