narrative-revision

This chapter consists primarily of authorial notes and editorial comments regarding character behavior and scene utility. The notes focus on the character Frag's demeanor, particularly his self-satisfaction and subtle physical cues that may be deceptive, as well as considerations about the timing of Ravna's return. The author debates the realism of Frag's smugness and how it should be perceived by Steel, indicating ongoing revisions to character portrayal and scene effectiveness.