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narrative-sensory-detail
The emphasis on including multiple sensory inputs, especially hearing, to deepen the scene's realism and emotional impact.
1 chapter across 1 book
A Fire Upon the Deep (2002)Vernor Vinge
Chapter 865
This chapter includes technical notes and meta-commentary on the depiction of a plasma bounce event and the sensory experiences of the character Pham. It suggests improvements for narrative techniques, such as using synthetic stereo sound to indicate threat vectors and incorporating more auditory details to enhance immersion. The chapter also reflects on the spatial description of the setting, aiming to create a landscape that feels simultaneously like an interior, and addresses character development concerns regarding Pham's self-doubt.