personality-drift

This chapter appears to be a collection of authorial notes and editorial comments concerning character development, terminology, and plot consistency in 'A Fire Upon the Deep.' It focuses on refining the portrayal of characters such as Johanna, Jefri, and Jaqueramaphan, addressing narrative coherence, and clarifying the use of specific terms like 'Two-Legs' and 'mantis.' The notes also highlight the need to balance romance, technical details, and world-building elements such as art perception and personality drift within the story.