subplot-integration

This chapter primarily consists of authorial notes and planning comments regarding the pacing and narrative structure of the voyage of the OOB, emphasizing the need to depict the passage of time and evolving relationships during the journey. It also addresses consistency in character naming and subplot integration, particularly concerning the Woodcarver references and the use of names like Steel and Flenser. The chapter functions as a meta-textual insight into the writing process rather than advancing the story directly.